You're writing style and structure is good Maarya, but you need to only focus on all the editing techniques that the brief asks for. - Use the task one list to make sure you have covered everything it wants (make the key words bold so its easier to see when you have done it in the essay) - Steer clear of analysing camera shots or sound, only talk about these if they are part of an analysis of editing, like cutting to the beat or shot variation and cross cutting - MAke sure your sources (the articles) are about the editing instead, as this will make them relevant to your work
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ReplyDeleteYou're writing style and structure is good Maarya, but you need to only focus on all the editing techniques that the brief asks for.
- Use the task one list to make sure you have covered everything it wants (make the key words bold so its easier to see when you have done it in the essay)
- Steer clear of analysing camera shots or sound, only talk about these if they are part of an analysis of editing, like cutting to the beat or shot variation and cross cutting
- MAke sure your sources (the articles) are about the editing instead, as this will make them relevant to your work
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